This will be ugly. In the last Life of a Chapter, I warned you that it would be ugly. No hyperbole. No belle of the ball is Chapter 8 right now. No tall drink of water. No foxy momma.
But when is editing and revision ever pretty, sterile or neat?
Never.
So. Don't be scuurred. I'm not anymore, now that it's all on page.
Here we go:
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
It WILL get better. Oh, yes it will. Because I've completed all these messy revisions and the chapter's clean... For now. But before I dirty it all up again, I will post them and I will bask in their cleanliness and ignore typos and still-clunky sentences and continuity lapses.
There is a light at the end of this tunnel.
Hopefully, it's not a train.
Home » How I Write » A Novel Idea - the Life of a Chapter IV
Popular Post
-
S4 / 1.973 cc / 162 PS / 140 ft/lb (190 Nm) @ 4.900 / 0 - 62 mph (100 km/h): 6,8 s / Vmax: 137 mph (221 km/h) (click images for a larger v...
-
H ave been using the Smart Tunnel to work for the past few days and incase you are wondering like me why both the tunnels look different int...
-
V12 / 5.576 cc / 385 PS / 406 ft/lb (550 Nm) @ 4.000 / 0 - 62 mph (100 km/h): 6,6 s / Vmax: 155 mph (250 km/h) (click images for a larger ...
-
Dan Neil has another must read article in today's LA Times. He heaps praise and digs the grave of Honda's fuel cell marvel. I'd ...
-
Well Kia is sure going after us "toaster pilot's" out there! Still likin' my xBox though...
-
A number of articles about "green cars" worth perusing in Saturday's New York Times Automotive section . Usually devoted to c...
-
My back is killing me ( again ), so having all kind of difficulties staying focused today. Be it work; be it blogging; be it life in general...
-
A few more hours and it's weekend. Though I hardly drank any alcohol, I'm still trying to recover from that trip to London . Think I...
-
S4 / 1.995 cc / 200 PS / 220 ft/lb (298 Nm) @ 3.000 / turbo / AWD / 0 - 62 mph (100 km/h): 6,1 s / Vmax: 132 mph (212 km/h) (click images ...
-
V8 / 4.973 cc / 231 PS / 288 ft/lb (390 Nm) @ 3.750 / 0 - 62 mph (100 km/h): 7,5 s / Vmax: 143 mph (230 km/h) (click images for a larger view)
No comments:
Post a Comment